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_jmgomez_ in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-04-24 21:26

Fair enough! Thank you :-D

_jmgomez_ in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-04-24 10:40

Hi /u/uncomfortable,

Such an awesome feedback. Thank you so much! Will pay more attention on those in the future. I kind of skipped the texture part because you said it wasn't that important. But will do the Challenge right after I complete the cylinders one, hope to complete both before start working on Animals. Want to combine painting materials on my own with the texture analysis (I think they can be complementary).

Regarding your question, here is an example of compound forms You think is it a good idea to practice them just now? Or is it better to wait until the hard surface part?

Just one more thing, for lesson 3 are we allowed to use toned paper? (Like the one in the example of compound forms)

Thank you for your hard work! I really appreciate what are you doing.

_jmgomez_ in the post "Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction (Patreon Critique Thread)"

2019-04-23 11:28

Hi /u/uncomfortable,

Took me a while, but here is my Lesson 2. Found all the exercise quite helpful. The dissections one was quite challenging, will have to keep practicing it.

Wanted to ask you something as well, is there any reason of why there is no compound form exercise? When do you think it is a good idea to incorporate it.

Thank you for all your amazing work!

Homework

_jmgomez_ in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2019-01-26 11:29

Hi u/uncomfortable

Just appended the extra page.

Thanks!

https://www.dropbox.com/home/drawing/DrawABox/250%20Boxes?preview=Photo+26-01-2019%2C+11+15+50.jpg

_jmgomez_ in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2019-01-22 16:40

as demonstrated here

Hi! Thank you for your review :-)

I got it, the thing is I was doing all of them in 2-point perspective. So one of the sets of lines are meant to be totally straight.

You are correct about getting wrong the line extending correcting method. Regarding the hatching, most of the time I was rotating the boxes so I applied it in the "same" face. But will take it into consideration.

In the last word, you meant boxes instead of pages? Im planing to reach 500 on my own somewhere before Lesson 4, too tired of the boxes! haah

Thank you for your patience. I really appreciate what you are doing here ( that's why I increased the pledge :-)

_jmgomez_ in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2019-01-22 11:36

Hi u/Uncomfortable,

I just uploaded the extra 75 boxes with the checking method. Let me know what you think

PS They are in the same folder as the previous: https://www.dropbox.com/sh/4f8s62fw9xz5zke/AAA4fwjRdNha76a6aNYVzrZ_a?dl=0

_jmgomez_ in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2019-01-12 20:57

point

Ohh I misunderstood it. I thought I should point out only the bad ones with the lines, not all of them. Will do that! It's ok, I wanted to get better rotating as well, so a chance for keep improving it :-D

Thank you for your time!

_jmgomez_ in the post "250 Box Challenge"

2019-01-12 15:14

Hi Uncomfortable,

they took me a while! Tried to be consistent and do them in batches of 10 or 20. I can see some improvement, tried to rotate some of then and starting at 200 and something I can see how it started to work. Will keep practicing rotating on my own :-)

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/4f8s62fw9xz5zke/AAA4fwjRdNha76a6aNYVzrZ_a?dl=0

Thank you!

_jmgomez_ in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2018-12-27 21:48

Will finish it first then. I have no rush.

Thank you so much for your reply!

_jmgomez_ in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2018-12-27 18:12

Thank you for such a nice feedback! Will try to rotate a few boxes in the challenge :-)

Do you recommend me doing the whole 250 boxes before starting lesson 2? (I have already 60) or should I start it and do both at the same time?

Thanks!!

_jmgomez_ in the post "Lesson 1: Lines, Ellipses and Boxes"

2018-12-24 12:07

Hi! Uncomfortable, here is my lesson 1

Let me know if you want me to redo something. I already started the 250 boxes challenge. Thanks!