Uncomfortable's Advice from /r/ArtFundamentals

Just started the boxes, needs improved but not sure what I am a missing thoughts?

https://i.redd.it/v3oktr778pw81.jpg

2022-04-30 17:11

AppleShadowy

Uncomfortable

2022-05-01 00:26

This subreddit doesn't allow single exercises or partial work, as explained here. You can however get feedback on individual exercises on the discord chat server though, and the folks there would be happy to help you out. For the subreddit, we're pushing students to post complete lesson work.

That said, the only thing you're missing is the first step, which was to draw a rectangular frame in which the exercise would be performed (and then again twice more on the same page).