This subreddit doesn't allow single exercises or partial work, as explained here. You can however get feedback on individual exercises on the discord chat server though, and the folks there would be happy to help you out. For the subreddit, we're pushing students to post complete lesson work.
For what it's worth, your ellipses are looking solid as-is. Unfortunately I can't give you more critique than that!
Uncomfortable
2022-04-05 00:00
This subreddit doesn't allow single exercises or partial work, as explained here. You can however get feedback on individual exercises on the discord chat server though, and the folks there would be happy to help you out. For the subreddit, we're pushing students to post complete lesson work.
For what it's worth, your ellipses are looking solid as-is. Unfortunately I can't give you more critique than that!