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11:20 PM, Wednesday March 13th 2024
Hello Rihral, I’ll be reviewing your 250 Box Challenge today.
First off, congratulations on completing the first hurdle of Drawabox. It’s definitely a long marathon but the quality of work between the start and end pages really demonstrates overall improvement. Now let’s begin with the critique.
Note: This was submitted before the revised 250 Box challenge so I'll be reviewing based on the old method. But I still suggest looking over the new topics for a deeper understanding.
Things you did well:
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Lines confidence definitely was a major strength here as you practise to draw straight from the shoulder. Construction lines are relatively straight and you maintain confidence in your lines.
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Hatching: from the start of the challenge, it's evident you patiently place your lines with the same confidence as every other line.
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Experimentation of box size, foreshortening, and orientation. This is a positive habit to carry forward and helps progress our spatial reasoning.
Things you can work on:
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2-3 sets of lines often converge in pairs rather than collectively towards their respective vanishing points. When constructing a box, be aware of the initial Y line and how each adjacent line should angle itself to the vanishing point. Here’s a diagram showing what to aim for.
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Line weight is appropriately applied, however the superimposed line sometimes wobbles/arcs as it reaches the end of the box edge. We want to always apply lines according to the principles of marking making in lesson 1, so try to maintain confident lines as you add the overlapping line.
Overall, you've done a good job of steadily improving your box quality . I'll mark this down as complete and send you off to Lesson 2. Good luck!
Next Steps:
Lesson 2.
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