Hello and welcome to drawabox!

I noticed that you have submitted more pages than necessary. Next time try to limit yourself only to the number of pages that are assigned.

So, I will look through only the specified number of pages - the first aligned ones for each exercise. The additional ones I will not take into account. In some cases, it seems that some of them cold be made in different time as they look quite outstanding from previous ones. I hope you were not grinding because it is massive waste of time.

Ok, now critique.

Lines

Good attempt in superimposed lines. Lines are properly lined up at the start. That is good. However, your attempt to meet the end point properly made your lines wobbly . It would be better to draw confident, smooth, and consistent lines even it means that in the end point they will fray. In this stage fraying at the end point is entirely normal. It will reduce with practice and time as opposed to wobbly lines. And remember to draw from your shoulder.

Ghosted lines look quite confident, too. However, I notice that your lines in few cases arc as they approach the end point. It is fine for it to stop short of, overshoot, or miss the end point, because the goal here is – first confidence, then accuracy.

Ghosted planes – quite good done but lines are little wobbly. Although this exercise is still about confident lines between planed dots.

Ellipses

In tables of ellipses I see quite wide range of ellipses: (a) confident, ghosted, but less accurate (these are the best ones), (b) less confident but more accurate (these are in second place), (c) ellipses where focus on drawing confident and if possible accurate ellipse with ghosting method is lost (these are not acceptable). I also noticed that in one section ellipses are drawn too small (comparing to three targeting points - top, bottom and left) and therefore they are drawn on top of each other. Some ellipses also do not have continuous line. The good thing in your ellipses - they in the most cases are drawn around the ellipses 2 to 3 times. Also, the orientation of ellipses (the angle at which it is positioned) is also quite consistent within the same section – that is good.

Ellipses in planes. In most cases the ellipses are wobbly and therefore are not confident.

Funnels. Your ellipses are pretty good. The minor axis cuts each ellipse into two equal, symmetrical halves. Also, the confidence and accuracy are in quite good balance.

Boxes

Plotted Perspective – nice and clean work. Well done.

Rough Perspective. Here I see good attempt - 2 sets of lines are mostly parallel/perpendicular to the horizon. However, the third set of lines that should converge to vanishing point on the horizon in some cases is quite far away. Even though you have mistaken in your estimations, the boxes still are likely to look close to correct. And for this stage it is enough. Just take more time to plan your dots for your lines for boxes. However, regarding the confidence of lines – it has dropped compared to ghosted lines. Remember that boxes are drawn from lines – from confident ghosted lines that are drawn through the two planed dots.

Rotated Boxes. Nice work on this exercise - gaps between boxes are narrow and your boxes are rotating.

Organic Perspective. Well done. You have constructed boxes along the swoopy line and making the boxes that are far away smaller and those who are closer – larger. However, it seems that you forgot to plan your dots before drawing a line. But in spite I noticed that you in the organic perspective exercise also considered that ‘parallel’ lines have their vanishing points. That is great.

Overall, good attempting to do Lesson 1. But from my side to complete the lesson fully (to understand the aim of exercises) I would suggest you redo some parts before moving on.