Arrows:-
arrows are well done
Sausages with ellipse and contour:-
you drew them equally but you drew to many ellipse the purpose of this exercise is to only make u understand 3D so make only 3 ellipse thats it for that same with the contouring.
Texture:-
texture well done you drew cast shadows which is what we want.
Texture on sausages:-
here the problem is in the first page where u should have drawn only cast shadows denser at the edges but fainter when you go towards the middle but you corrected that in after dawings so thats fine.
2nd texture top left of the sheet looks flat the crevices shadows are not made around the sausage contour
and u forgot that the center will be seen as well. since it is a sliced cucumber like shape.
the rest is done well, intersection exercise was hard to begin with so, i will just say if u have a bit of problem check this link:-
my final note:- make sure to practice sausages before doing any drawing since its very important in the coming chapters. and goodluck.
Next Steps:
you can move on to next lesson.
thank you so much for the critique!
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