Hello, Cykachu! I'd like to give some critique on your work.

Lines

• Superimposed lines. I can notice that your lines tend to fray at the farther end which is completely acceptable as you're beginning the course. I can also see the work you put to establish the starting points, though they didn't always fit in some cases. Yet, I don't see your second page of this exercise. If you forgot about it, attach it here in the comments.

• Ghosted lines. The linework is pretty good, I didn't notice any wobbling. The only major thing to my mind is that your lines tend to make an slight arch. Make sure you keep pushing yourself to draw from your shoulder. If you keep having trouble with this, try to compensate by arching your lines in the opposite direction.

• The ghosted planes look confident and even have a plenty of accuracy, good job.

Ellipses

• The tables of ellipses are amazing! They tend to have a smooth surface without wobbling and a pretty symmetrical shape with no lagging at the ends. I'd say, they are better than mine after the seven months of DaB. Also, you are drawing them through two or three times, just as requested.

• The ellipses in planes are also in general smooth, however, keep in mind that you are supposed to prioritize the elliptical shape over it touching the borders. Preserve this exercise as a part of your warmups and you will improve.

• While the ellipses in the funnels are of okayish quality, I can't help but notice that they are starting to loose that even shape from your previous tasks. Also, a large number of them doesn't touch the funnel sides which would have helped in the latter lessons to set up the forms in 3D and which this task is trying to foreshadow. Though it shows that you have some understanding and that you try playing with the elliptical degrees, which is a good sign, I think you'll need to work more on it.

Boxes

• I start to see some very disturbing signs on your plotted boxes. Overshoot hatching, clearly redrawn lines, some totally confused lines when the hatching conflicts with the initial and the new line (right-bottom of the third panel). It really breaks the believability of the forms, so you'll need to tighten the grip on markmaking.

• Great work on rough perspective! There is a visible improvement of their convergence. Still... the same double-lines problem shows up in a few of the boxes.

• The rotated boxes are neat. I can see you actually trying to rotate them and using the neighboring boxes as a guide. You also put the work to emphasize the order with hatching. Wonderful!

• The organic perspective pages are not so great. Again, I can see you second-guessing yourself and redrawing the lines whereas the very thing drawabox attempts to teach is that any decisions are permanent. Additionally, a huge distortion of some boxes is present there, make sure you have the constant rate of foreshortening. Seeing how a few boxes are also divergent, I'd like you to revisit this exercise. (don't forget to reread the lesson content before each revision)

Now that we have come to the end I'd like to congratulate you on making the first step into the world of Drawabox. While it may not have been smooth, you'd shown that with effort you were capable of making a significant progress on this subject. I believe you'll be doing just great after a couple of revisions.