Hi! Let’s take this one exercise at a time~

The superimposed lines started off a little rough, what with the fraying issues, but this was resolved in page 2- good job keeping on top of it! There’s still an issue with them, however, and that’s that their trajectories are not consistent, so try to be mindful of that. Similarly, though they started off a little stiff, the ghosted lines improved nicely by the time you reached the ghosted planes exercise, so nicely done in that regard, too. Even the overshooting issue is something that improves by the end of this submission- great job, all around. One tiny recommendation I have is to use start/end points for the non-diagonal center lines of the planes, if you can.

Moving on to the ellipse section, the table of ellipses exercise looks quite good! Your ellipses are smooth, and rounded, though you’ll occasionally draw through them a little too much. Remember: at least twice, but no more than 3 times, is the rule. The ellipses in planes exercise has this issue too, but it looks fairly good otherwise. Your ellipses do a good job of maintaining their roundness, despite the added difficulty of having to touch all 4 sides of the plane. Finally, in the funnels exercise, the minor axis properly cuts each ellipse into two equal, symmetrical halves, but I do notice some spacing issues. Be careful you’re not rushing into the execution- the reason we draw confidently, is because we’ve already done our best to ensure success in a previous step: the ghosting step. If we skimp out on that, it’ll be reflected in our marks.

Starting off the box section, the plotted perspective exercise looks quite clean- nicely done. The rough perspective exercise improved nicely throughout the set, and to take it even further, I’ll recommend spending a little longer planning your points. There’s no obligation to stick to your original ones- if you find them to be incorrect (which you can do by ghosting a line to them, and beyond them, to the horizon), then absolutely feel free to ignore them, and plot out some new ones. Solid attempt at the rotated boxes exercise. There’s a few too many boxes here (a whole extra layer!), but they’re snug, and they rotate comfortably. The line-weight/hatching does a good job of clarifying what’s what, too. One recommendation I have is to draw a little bigger if you can. Especially for this exercise, your brain needs some room to be able to think through things, and that’ll help in regards to that. Finally, the organic perspective exercise looks great. You’ve, with some notable exceptions, been mindful of the foreshortening of your boxes, keeping it shallow, and consistent, and the increase in size, too, is subtle, and believable. The boxes themselves are quite good, as well. To take them further, of course, there’s the box challenge. Feel free to move on to it!