Hello,
here's critique:
Arrows - some of them are too flat or with wrongly shaded sides, but most look fine - in future you can try to add line weight first then its easier to see arrow in 3d space and know which sides to shade
Contour ellipsed - OK
Contour curves - OK - though try not to redo failed lines and work with what you got
Texture analysis - OK
Dissections - most of them are explict (drawing everytinhg) try making some implict ones too (draw gradiation of dark to light), some of them do not break the form where they could (remember good silloutte is very important)
Intersections - OK for now (main goal at lesson 2 is to draw similarly sized forms as if they belong to the same space, most intersections themselves are bad, but it's not expecting to do them well at this stage, so no worries)
Organic intersections - I see you got the concept, though you seem to have forgotten shadows for most of these?
Overall I think you did well and can move on to the next lesson
Good luck in your art journey!
Next Steps:
Lesson 3
Thank you for the critique :)
This is a remarkable little pen. Technically speaking, any brush pen of reasonable quality will do, but I'm especially fond of this one. It's incredibly difficult to draw with (especially at first) due to how much your stroke varies based on how much pressure you apply, and how you use it - but at the same time despite this frustration, it's also incredibly fun.
Moreover, due to the challenge of its use, it teaches you a lot about the nuances of one's stroke. These are the kinds of skills that one can carry over to standard felt tip pens, as well as to digital media. Really great for doodling and just enjoying yourself.
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