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1:55 AM, Monday July 10th 2023
Hi, I'll be reviewing your hw.
Superimposed Lines: Second part of this is better. There are quiet a lot of wobbly lines. More warming up would help I think.
Ghosted Lines: Better but still a number of wobbly lines.
Ghosted Planes: Ah, here we get our really good straight lines. This shows improvment.
Table of Elipses: Good job on these.
Elipses In Planes: I can see a real attempt to keep everyting inside the boundries. Good.
Funnels: Pretty good, one thing that could have helped was keeping these a little spread apart.
Ploted perspective: Beautiful on these.
Rough Perspective: Not all the lines make it but they do go to the horizone line. Excellent.
Rotated Boxes: A little messy but I think you understand the concept.
Organic Perspective: Here it seems your pen is running out of ink but well done.
Next Steps:
Two things before moving on to think about. Make sure you pen doesn't run out of ink, or press a little harder down. Second always warmup so your wobbly lines become more straight. But I will mark this as finished so move onto 250 box challenge.
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