I'll do your review, I'm sorry that you didnt get a complete review before.

Superimposed Lines

• You have some fraying on both ends, and we don't want fraying on the begiining point. Jsut take a little more care when placing your pen down at the beginning.

Ghosted Lines

• You have a few some arcing and swooping lines. That's often from your elbow and/or wrist being involved. It can alsao be a cause of your nrain trying to steer the line as you draw it. Try drawing them a little faster perhaps.

• A smooth straight line that misses the end point is better than one that wobbles. swoops, or arcs and hits the target.

Ghosted Planes

• Same comment on arcing lines, it improved in your 2nd page but you want to make sure you focus on confident lines. Accuracy comes later.

Table of Ellipses

• You want to draw through your ellipses at least 2x (but no more than 3x). Twice is the target

• You want the ellipses in each section to be the same angle and degree

• You should vary the ellipses for each section, refer to the lesson for that, including the example homework

• Don't rush - ghost the motion and then set your pen down and repeat that motion. You can literally close your eyes at that point. A smooth ellipse is better than an accurate one.

Ellipses in Funnels

• You want to draw through your ellipses at least 2x (but no more than 3x). Twice is the target

• Don't let the ellipse get deformed by trying to touch the nearby lines. Ghost the motion and then set your pen down and repeat that motion. You can literally close your eyes at that point. A smooth ellipse is better than an accurate one.

• Try and keep the ellipses aligned to the center line. A good ellipse gets cut exactly in half by that line.

Ellipses in planes

• You want to draw through your ellipses at least 2x (but no more than 3x). Twice is the target. You have a few 4x around in this exercise.

• Don't let the ellipse get deformed by trying to touch the nearby lines. Ghost the motion and then set your pen down and repeat that motion. You can literally close your eyes at that point. A smooth ellipse is better than an accurate one.

Plotted Perspective

• Good job but please keep to the instructions and follow the layout of the example homework from the lesson. This should have been 3 panes of work on one page.

Rough Perspective

• Only extend to the horizon line when you check your work. going beyond makes it hard to see what is going on (for you as well as your reviewer)

• Your back face of the box wants to always smaller than the front (its further away from the viewer)

• Try to keep your front and back face lines parallel and perpendicular to your horizon line

• Wobble/arcing of your lines

Rotated Boxes

• In this one your boxes arent actually rotating

• Wobble/arcing of your lines

Organic Persective

• please keep to the instructions and follow the layout of the example homework from the lesson. This should have been 3 panes of work per page.

• Make sure you are making it clear that the boxes are moving away from the viewer along the line. Your 2nd page what the best.

• Wobble/arcing of your lines

Overall

• You have done a pretty good job on a lot of these exercises :)

• Lines: You want to work on confidence over accuracy - draw as fast as you need to, in order to eliminate wobbling. Prioritizing the shoulder can help with arcing.

• Ellipses: You want to work on confidence and alignment, and drawing through at least 2 times but no more than 3 times

• Rotated Boxes: I want to be sure you understand how to rotate them from the lesson instructions.

If you have any questions feel free to ask!

Paul-A-Saurus

1 You need to be more careful with placement of you pen at the beginning of each stroke.

2 I see some wobbly lines. Draw from your elbow without second guessing.