Hi Perynia,

I've checked your submission!

Okay, I really like the enthusiasm that is seen in your lesson, every page is full and it really looks like you are really trying and making an effort! However, I see that you are making one major mistakes all through out the lesson.

You are not making confident marks. Now, there is a rule (when it comes to Draw a Box) that I recommend you drill into your brain; Confidence>Accuracy. You have to strive to make your marks look confident over anything else, if you miss or overshoot, don't worry, that gets better with time, but confidence doesn't get better if you don't apply it! But, how do you do this? The ghosting method. Confidence in your marks should come from you ghosting and repeating until you feel ready to draw something. Always ghost and take your time doing it, don't rush learning.

Now, this that I'm telling you applies to everything: lines, ellipses, boxes (which are basically an organized group of lines). So keep that in mind for what comes next.

I'm gonna mark this lesson as completed, keep it up!