Hello there I call myself Quat and I will be critiquing your homework today

First of all Organic arrows exercise :

your arrows are well drawn and you seem to follow the steps correctly, although I should point out that some of your lines are wobbly and even though it isn't enough to redo the entire thing it is worth pointing out. Also you seem to shade the wrong parts of the arrow for a lot of arrows. However it isn't important for drawabox so I won't be talking about it a lot just remember that the side that you should shade is the side that doesn't get much light.

Secondly Organic forms with counter lines exercise :

You did a good job with this experience, and there is not much to talk about.

Thirdly texture :

For the texture analysis exercise you seem to have a problem when it comes to transitioning from dense to sparse in the third panels of all the textures, Your first texture, which I assume is crumbled paper, doesn't have gradual transitioning, basically it started very dense and then immediately went to medium density and and staying at the same density until near the end where it immediately became low density, I recommend that you try starting with the point with the least density and move to higher density areas. And the other textures seem to suffer the same problem but you also seem to add a lot of details to them, the inclusion of the small details isn't bad by itself but you have used them a little too much for the exercise.

For the dissections exercise your textures seem to be explicit rather than implicit making your textures a mess to look at and it seems that you drew the forms of a lot of your textures, such as the corn, the pineapple, the octopus tentacles, the scales,ect to fix this you should focus on drawing the shadow that your object leaves rather than the actual object as demonstrated here, if you find it difficult to understand how the cast shadow would be on a particular object don't hesitate to ask for help in the drawabox discord server. Also there is also the problem of not breaking the silhouette which makes your drawing feel flat.

Fourthly the form intersections exercise :

At first glance I noticed that you didn't do a page containing boxes only, which was stated in the homework. Anyways there is not much to talk about, although the page seems a bit messy with the amount of objects but you did a good job with the exercise. (by the way I won't ask you to do a page that only consists of boxes but I wanted to remind you to pay attention when the homework requires a spesific thing to be drawn since this will happen in later lessons too).

Lastly the organic intersections exercise :

Some of your forms are simply just flouting in the first page and the shadows seem to be stuck to the form for some forms and in some cases appear out of nowhere. The second page suffers the same problem with the shadow but it is also constructed like a jenga tower which is not necessarily a mistake but it seems like you could have drew more forms interaction horizontally.