I think you're definitely making a lot of progress here when it comes to learning to think about how your lines are supposed to converge together, rather than just drawing them as you feel they ought to be oriented. There's still lots of improvement to be had, but you're moving in the right direction. Always remember though - when you're putting down a single line, there are 3 others (the ones it runs parallel to) that you need to be thinking about, even those that haven't been drawn yet. Always think about how they need to be oriented in order to converge together.

It's almost like beating a dead horse at this point, but we need to remind ourselves of this every time we draw a line. What does it run parallel to, and what does that mean about how I need to orient this line.