2:45 PM, Wednesday November 23rd 2022
As noted in response to another one of your critiques, this is not actually helpful to the student, and unfortunately really hurts their chances of getting useful feedback from others, as the system ends up thinking they have received helpful critique. I am marking this as unhelpful so their submission can be returned to the queue.
If you're interested in giving more helpful critique, you can use the unofficial critique guides I shared with you in my previous such comment.