Lesson 5: Applying Construction to Animals

11:23 PM, Thursday April 28th 2022

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Well, this one was a doozy. I hope its not too bad, although I can already see the critiques from here. But I'm here to improve, and mistakes are part of the process. Thank you.

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2:27 PM, Friday April 29th 2022

These look really good. Proportions are in need of a little work, but the construction itself gives a strong sense of form, and does make it feel 3 dimensional. Proportions are one of the hardest part of this subject, and not the major focus, so something to keep working on on the side. The line quality is exceptionally smooth, and confident. You clearly understand construction by now, and have the marksmanship skills to pull off what you want to.

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Move onto next lesson, and keep up the good work.

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5:17 PM, Tuesday May 24th 2022

In the organic intersections it does not look like you considerd where the shadows would fall. Rather some lines are made thick black. You should be considering where those shadows fall , look a the lesson again. https://drawabox.com/lesson/2/9/shadows

think you could have benefited from less texture in a good number of the drawings.

Look over the organic intersections again, how you apply shadows and when line weight should be applied. The video lesson is good to view again here.

It does look like you got the 3D effect on there however but I will ask for revision.

1 page organic intersections(take a look at the lesson again)

1 page of any one animal construction (draw through ellipses at least once, ghost all your lines and dont add any texture, try working line by line and only add lineweight when needed)

Good luck :)

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1 page organic intersections

1 animal construction

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