9:46 PM, Sunday August 2nd 2020
They look much better so far. Another tip would be to place 10-20 pages of paper under your current sheet you are working on this will help improve the issues you are having with the table friction even more. Good to see you haven't given up and are actively trying to figure out how to improve your art skills that's one of the most important steps to becoming a good artist. This is a hard skill to learn even the basics can take 1000s of hours of work to master. Make sure you are drawing for fun as well it maybe hard to since you may not like what your final products are but its one the most important steps to absorbing the knowledege you gain here.