10:55 AM, Monday March 2nd 2020
Hi Ralkarn,
Starting with your lines, you have done a great good job keeping fraying to one end. Your lines are a little wobbly. Make sure you are using your shoulder and trust your ghosting. Maybe during your warm up do some ghosted lines by clising your eyes when you place your pen on the paper so you can get to know what it feels like to not worry about accuracy.
Your ellipses are nice and tightly packed. Remember to only go around them 2-3 times, a few look like you have done more. There are some sharp edges which may improve if you concentrate on your ghosting. On your funnels sometimes the ellipses drift away from the minor axis so keep an eye on that.
Your convergences for your boxes are looking pretty good for lesson 1. Your lines are looking a little wobbly again which is very common. It is easy to het overwhelmed when you are asked to start constructing things. Take the same amount of care for each line of the box as you do with the earlier ones. For your organic perspective you have a good start fir adding depth to the frame. Don't be afraid ti draw boxes both bigger and with more overlaps to really sell the illusion.
You appear to be missing your rotated boxes so before I can mark this as complete I would like you to do that. Otherwise a good start!
Next Steps:
1 page of rotated boxes please.