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3:41 PM, Thursday May 27th 2021

Hello CHILDSLAVERYROXX congrats on completing the 250 Box Challenge, here are my thoughts:

  • as lesson goes on they do too many boxes with dramatic foreshortening

  • lacks use of strategic line weight

  • at times will go over lines with the intention of correcting them

I can definitely notice your improvement, you seem much more confident by the end of it than you did at the start. There is not much to point out, however I will have to ask you to do 30 more boxes all with shallow foreshortening. It is hard to evaluate the quality of your convergences since as the challenge goes on you started making their foreshortening more dramatic. I'd also suggest that you try different orientations for your boxes as at times they become repetitive and you seem to follow the same configuration of boxes for most pages. You are almost there, this is the final push.

Best of luck

-Slyx

Next Steps:

I can definitely notice your improvement, you seem much more confident by the end of it than you did at the start. There is not much to point out, however I will have to ask you to do 30 more boxes all with shallow foreshortening. It is hard to evaluate the quality of your convergences since as the challenge goes on you started making their foreshortening more dramatic. I'd also suggest that you try different orientations for your boxes as at times they become repetitive and you seem to follow the same configuration of boxes for most pages. You are almost there, this is the final push.

Best of luck

-Slyx

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
4:11 PM, Tuesday July 13th 2021

Oh alright I'll finish those 30 boxes. Sorry for the late reply.

5:15 PM, Tuesday July 20th 2021

Hello, I've completed the 30 boxes you said to complete.

https://imgur.com/a/76ws4pb

2:34 PM, Monday August 16th 2021

Well done, feel free to move ahead.

Next Steps:

Well done, feel free to move ahead.

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