Hi, I’m Qrious K and I’ll be critiquing your work.

Pages 1-10

You have a strong start. Many of the lines begin to converge, while some groups do not. I also see a variety of boxes, which is also good.

Pages 11-21

There are more convergences as you draw more boxes. The use of dynamic perspectives creates greater variety.

Pages 22-27

Some of the boxes on page 25 become too dynamic, with a view appearing to be triangular prisms. That said, the rest look fine and hit most of their marks.