4:43 PM, Thursday August 6th 2020
Here are the additional Pages: https://imgur.com/gallery/1CTGE66
First off I apologize for not using printer paper prior, I felt organized with a sketchbook so I was looking for one that worked for pens. After reading your critique I've immediately switched to printer paper and also bought folders to keep the lessons organized.
In these revised pages I did use one contour line on the stag beetle which sat along the surface of one form. This was an error since I started constructing the back like I did with the louse when practicing but quickly realized this wouldn't work for the beetle abdomen form I was constructing.
I've tried to follow these 4 restrictions as meticulously as possible, if there are any mistakes or additional pages required I have no issue retrying. I heavily appreciate the extensive critique and all of the focus on details I messed up on. The advice is very helpful as well because while I was drawing these on my first attempt I was definitely getting distracted with making them presentable. I don't notice these mistakes at times until the critique and it helps me get back on track before I start forming bad habits. The diagrams especially helped with this. I feel much more confident with these additional pages and if you see anything I didn't while making these I'd love more feedback.