5:59 PM, Monday September 19th 2022
Hi HFO1! I'll be reviewing your homework.
On some of the intersections, there are some strange things, like curves on cylinders that don't accelerate enough when reaching the edge, that sort of thing, but overall, they look pretty good.
As far as your object drawings go, I have to say that they look impeccable to me. You repeated some lines, and I'm sure that it was recommended to use ballpoint pen for this lesson, but besides that, the constructions are great, you subdivided a lot and whenever it was necessary; you chose a lot of complex objects too, so congratulations.
I had the same problem with the headphones, and arrived at a similar solution, however, I think we handled the headband differently. This is a demo someone made to help me with that, using half an ellipse to work with the headband is what really helped me.
I asume you used ortographic studies for things like the knifes and the detail on the little house, but I'm really curious about how you handled the spheric objects and especially that cart thing. I would've enclosed the whole thing in a box for starters and then I would've broken it into sections, but your solution looks a lot more elegant, and I'm curious to know how you determined the point at which the top section should start.
Also, I don't know if you do it already, but after a week of posting your homework, if you haven't had a review, you can go on Discord and ask for it to be included on a spreadsheet, that way it gets critiqued as soon as possible. After Lesson 1 though you have to make 5 critiques per submission to get yours reviewed, but still, it's pretty quick. I say that because I saw you uploaded this lesson a couple of times before.
Anyway, congratulations on finishing Lesson 6! Feel free to move on to the 25 Wheel Challenge.
Next Steps:
- Move on to the 25 Wheel Challenge