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5:09 PM, Sunday November 5th 2023

These are definitely headed in the right direction and with more mileage you'll become more consistent.

Two quick things to note, remember to draw through all of your ellipses, you're neglecting to do so at times. You also only need to draw the small contour ellipse on the viewer facing end of your forms, not both ends.

Other than that these are looking well done, I'll be marking your submission complete.

Best of luck in lesson 3.

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Move on to lesson 3.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
9:38 PM, Sunday November 5th 2023

Thank you so much! your critique really helped!

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