10:06 AM, Wednesday February 23rd 2022
Thank you for bearing with my revision! Lily.
Now lets move on toward critiquing your work
Funnels.
The new funnels looks amazing. You're focusing on going through them only 2-3 times, No more no less. One thing that you could improve is the Alignment of ellipses. But this is a very common mistake students face , And it will get better with time.
Rough perspective.
Your new rough perspective looks a lot better than the previous one. you are following my instruction properly but don't forget Always extend your line only to hit the horizon line
Next Steps:
Although there's quite a few critique here and there.
I think your submission is great, And that you're ready for
250 Boxes challenge.
Don't forget to
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Put the finished lesson into your warmup routine. (10-15 minute per day before starting drawing anything or drawabox.)
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Practice on what i've critiqued on
May the box lord have mercy on our souls. Goodluck!