3:10 PM, Thursday July 23rd 2020
While giving detailed critiques on request would undermine that which keeps Drawabox viable as a business, I do understand that having to wait a month and longer to get feedback can be difficult. Remember that there are other options - the discord chat server, for instance.
Also, you're welcome to post your work again if you haven't received a response in a while. Critiquing other students helps bump your submission's position by basically keeping it higher on the list for longer - the number of critiques you do works against the post's age, so if your post is a month old, it's going to require a lot more critiques to get it back up. If however you just post it again (which again, is totally fine if it's been around for a couple weeks), it should stay higher on the list for longer and increase your chances at getting feedback.
Anyway, since you have done loads of critiques of other students, I figure I might as well let you know that you should have no issues moving onto Lesson 2. Your boxes here are extremely well done, and you're clearly thinking quite a bit about how each line aligns to converge with its parallel counterparts, and your use of line weight helps imbue your boxes with a strong sense of solidity. You're doing very well, so you should absolutely feel free to move onto lesson 2.