250 Box Challenge

5:18 PM, Saturday May 29th 2021

Dropbox - 250 boxes.rar - Simplify your life

Dropbox: https://www.dropbox.com/s/8rdulnmw2rfewkk/250%20boxes.rar?dl=0

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I have to resort using my dropbox, i hope that is fine. Imgur was constantly failing to upload.

For the lesson I have a lot of difficulty constructing the inner lines, I know Uncomfortable says not to focus on the inner lines and just concentrate on constructing and projecting the exterior lines to their appropriate VP but it still is an issue for me. Also at times I am unable to read which point I should be changing to fix a box if there was a problem with that box.

For eg. If one line was converging/diverging, and everything else was fine (at a glance). I cannot tell what to change because all lines would've been affected. I hope you can give some insight on that problem I am facing.

Thank you!

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3:10 AM, Tuesday June 1st 2021

Hi there, I'll be handling your Box Challenge critique.

Congratulations on completing the 250 box challenge, not only have you grown through the experience but you've shown your dedication to improving and that's something to be proud of.

While you have shown growth through the challenge there are some key things to point out that will help you in your future attempts.

Your line work has definitely improved, it's looking tidier and more confident. It's also great to see you're experimenting with different orientations and proportions while drawing your boxes, these different scenarios will help you deepen your understanding of the forms you're creating. I'll also point out that you started to draw larger as the challenge went on which is great, it helps build comfort when drawing with your shoulder and allows you to see your mistakes more clearly.

As for issues to point out the largest one I notice is you're trying to keep your lines as parallel as you can. If our boxes were physical objects they would indeed have parallel edges but when drawing them we have to account for perspective. Keeping the idea of perspective in mind we have to adjust and have our lines begin to converge to a vanishing point. As you can see in this example, the closer our vanishing point is the faster our lines will converge towards it, the inner pair tends to remain fairly similar while the outer pair can vary quite a bit depending on the vanishing point's location.

By attempting to keep your lines as parallel as possible you're basically working against this idea and if your lines are a bit off there's an increased chance that your lines end up diverging (which some of yours do) which throws everything off even more.

Remember that we always want each set of 4 lines converging towards a vanishing point as a set, not in pairs and not diverging from the vanishing point.

As for your question about how to fix a box, the answer is honestly that you shouldn't really. When planning out your lines you should be keeping the entire set in mind and how they converge to a single point. Trying to fix it often takes your focus off the set and places it on to that particular line, which can than potentially effect every other line you draw afterwards. Part of the reason we use ink as well is to teach us to work with our mistakes rather than trying to obsessively correct them.

Drawing boxes is a good way of getting some line weight practice in as well, just remember we want to apply it subtly and confidently as mentioned here.

I won't be moving you on just yet, I want to make sure you understand some of the issues I brought up first.

Please complete and submit 15 more boxes.

Remember to experiment with foreshortening, with some of your boxes have the vanishing point closer and in others have the vanishing point further.

While the box challenge can be draining I know you're capable of doing this and I look foward to seeing your work.

Next Steps:

Please complete and submit 15 more boxes.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
5:23 PM, Friday June 4th 2021

https://imgur.com/a/wTsWEK2

I hope this satisfies the corrections needed. I tried not to focus/fix on the back Y this time and just align the lines to the VP for the forward facing lines and tried to visualize the entire box as I was drawing the line. Also tried to focus on foreshortened boxes.

5:38 AM, Saturday June 5th 2021

These are definitely a huge improvement.

Be careful moving the vanishing point too close on just one side unless you are purposely aiming for that type of distortion but keep experimenting.

I'll be marking your submission complete and moving you on to lesson 2.

Keep practicing previous exercises as warm ups and good luck!

Next Steps:

Move on to lesson 2.

This critique marks this lesson as complete.
7:44 AM, Saturday June 5th 2021

I'm aware of the distortion :D, just playing around to see what I can visualize. Thank you for the critique and comments!

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