2:57 PM, Monday July 21st 2025
Overall these are better, but there are still a few points I want to call out where you are not quite applying everything you know and understand regarding the concepts covered in the course as well as you could be.
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To start, I can see that despite the points I raised before, you don't appear to have made much in the way of attempts to approach texture using implicit markmaking, cast shadows, etc. and continue to use those filled areas to represent form shading. While I noticed some areas that could be construed as an attempt at drawing cast shadows, like what we're seeing here, it lacks clearly defined shadow shapes due to not following the methodology raised in the reminders I linked you to previously. This does suggest that you may not have taken enough time to go through the feedback that was provided, or the sections of the lesson material that were referenced there, in order to apply them in a concerted and intentional manner.
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While your approach to structure is much better than before, there are still areas where you're skipping steps - although it's not always consistent. For example, your approach here involved defining a cylindrical ring in the center of the spokes, and then box structures extending out from them. Conversely, many others (like is one) skip establishing a simpler cylindrical structure in the center and instead jump straight to having the spokes extend out of it as a singular form.
I will be marking this challenge as complete, as you've moved in the right direction in terms of the main issue I wanted addressed, and because texture is not a basis upon which I generally assign revisions for this challenge, but this definitely suggests that you need to reconsider how you're approaching going through the feedback you receive, and reviewing the material that is brought to your attention.
When it comes to avoiding going into autopilot, while things like flipping your references can help in some ways, ultimately the main thing is going to be working through a given task more slowly, and consciously giving yourself the opportunity to make decisions in between actions. But of course, that is a habit that is developed over time with continuous pushback every time you catch yourself slipping into auto-pilot, so it's not just a switch we can flip.
Next Steps:
Review the sections I linked you to previously, then move onto Lesson 7.





