Hello! I'm Joxmarf and I will be reviewing your Lesson 1
Superimposed Lines
There's fraying. Remember to place your pen mindfully before doing the stroke.
Ghosted Lines
Well done.
Ghosted Planes and Ellipses
Remember to ghost before doing every single line. Think of the direction of your line. While accuracy is by no means priority, mindfully and confidently doing your stroke will result in more accuracy. Also remember to reread the instructions if you don't remember them very well. Some of your planes have many lines in the wrong directions or not enough lines. Remember, there should be four lines per plane. For ellipses, also remember to ghost. Remember you are trying to fit the ellipse into the plane and make them tight.
Table of Ellipses
Remember to give your ellipses two passes. Also make them tight and ghost before executing them.
Funnels
Well done, but remember to done every ellipse mindfully. Ghost every time.
Plotted Perspective
Your hatching is messy and at times it looks more like scribbles than carefully done lines. Please remember to use the ghostig method for them.
Rough Perspective
Well done.
Rotated boxes
Once again, your lines look a bit messy and rushed. Please use the ghosting method onwards.
Organic Perspective
Do not re-do lines and always remember to complete boxes.
Next Steps:
I will ask two pages of ghosted planes and ellipses. Please apply the feedback I gave you. Good job on your lesson 1!
https://imgur.com/a/6Vnebif So sorry this took so long I’ve been doing the box challenge and didn’t get the time to upload until now
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You asked for ghost planes and ellipses didn't you?
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