Partial Lesson 1 Submission (2 / 10 exercises)
4:55 AM, Wednesday April 8th 2020
I redid the planes just for the ellipses.
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5:40 AM, Wednesday April 8th 2020
Outside of what I mentioned in the previous exercise, I’m also noticing a bit of a tail to your ellipses, particularly noticeable in the funnels exercise. To fix that, I’ll recommend lifting your pen off the page at the end of the rotations, rather than flicking it off, and being careful to maintain the ghosting motion until it’s off.
That’s to keep in mind for your warmups, though. All 3 exercises are fine, so feel free to move on.
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