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5:39 PM, Friday February 12th 2021

You should submit your revisions as a reply to your original critique.

6:38 PM, Saturday February 20th 2021
5:33 PM, Sunday February 21st 2021

This is a very good improvement! I can see that your mark making is steadily looking more confident and your boxes are doing a better job of converging towards their shared vanishing points.

Remember that you should be employing the ghosting method for every mark you make, including extra line weight. I would also recommend you reread this section from lesson 1 about arcing.

I am going to mark this lesson as complete and you can now move onto lesson 2!

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