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9:09 PM, Sunday July 24th 2022

You could also practice exercises from Lesson 1 that you feel like you're struggling with, if you're feeling up to it. These boxes have good linework, but there is a lot of guesswork here too It's important to note the orientation of your boxes will be restricted.

Give yourself a second to think about how you're plotting your line.

And of course, continue focusing on your line wobbling. The exercises you've shown here are done correctly.

Next Steps:

Redo two more pages of rough perspective, focusing on how your lines behave according to this lesson. Continue keeping up the good work on your line wobble.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
11:16 AM, Tuesday July 26th 2022

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2:29 AM, Monday August 1st 2022

Remember; horizontal lines must run parallel to the horizon line, and verticles must run perpendicular to it. Try rotating your page based on what's comfortable for your shoulders and back, see if that helps.

Next Steps:

You are getting close! Continue to review the Rough Perspective homework exercise. Pay close attention to how your boxes are rotating against the horizon line.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
4:39 PM, Thursday August 4th 2022

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