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2:29 AM, Monday August 1st 2022

Remember; horizontal lines must run parallel to the horizon line, and verticles must run perpendicular to it. Try rotating your page based on what's comfortable for your shoulders and back, see if that helps.

Next Steps:

You are getting close! Continue to review the Rough Perspective homework exercise. Pay close attention to how your boxes are rotating against the horizon line.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
4:39 PM, Thursday August 4th 2022
8:12 AM, Friday August 19th 2022

Line up the bottoms of your boxes with the same direction as the horizon line. Focus on how your boxes rotate as you ghost your lines before you put down a mark.

Next Steps:

If at first you don't succeed, try again.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
5:01 PM, Tuesday August 23rd 2022

https://imgur.com/a/84uww7B

Thanks for still keeping up with me lol, hopefully this gets through.

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