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5:17 PM, Sunday November 19th 2023

https://imgur.com/a/6pNyXZE https://imgur.com/a/aKs4nFF sorry for the late links, I already have done 2 of the excercises, I had some health problem, so the organic perspective isn't as clear as I want it to be, still i started the 250 box challenge, I'm at 60, thank you for your feedback, your critique was wonderful

7:32 PM, Sunday November 19th 2023

These are much clearer, especially the rotated boxes. The only complaints I have are the table of ellipses and the organic perspective, but not because they're not done well but because it seems that your pen was struggling with those two. Those two are still kinda messy, but since they are done much better I don't think you need to redo those again.

I did see that you got a critique before mine so it's fine that you moved on to the 250 box challenge. I'll mark you as complete and I wish you luck on your 250 boxes!

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No added steps needed. Though this student should probably get a better pen in the future...

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