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10:20 PM, Saturday June 24th 2023

Nop sorry D: I do it that way cuz my wrist hurts so I wanna minimize typing as much as I can, I can make you a small summary if u want:

Main things are:

-Arrows lack a bit of depth, try to make the gaps between each fold of each arrow grow more exponentially like on this example

-On organic forms on some places they aren't simple (just on a few places so it might be unconscious, but just in case)

-In the form intersections the main thing was that some of the forms don't have shallow foreshortening, so focus on placing the vanishing points on each form pretty far away

If u have any specific questions about anything please ask as well! And good luck with lesson 3!

5:49 AM, Sunday June 25th 2023

It's okay :-3. Thank you once again!

2:09 AM, Tuesday June 27th 2023
edited at 2:11 AM, Jun 27th 2023

no worries and good luck! (Also if you add another submission to the sheet, 2 weeks pass and i'm gonna take care of it, remind me that you prefer text so I critique that one with writing! Because I might forget)

edited at 2:11 AM, Jun 27th 2023
6:27 AM, Tuesday June 27th 2023
edited at 6:27 AM, Jun 27th 2023

No you don't have to. Captions/subtitles for me are more of a convenience than anything. Without captions I can still understand fully what you said.

I think increasing the volume is a good option. I crank the video up to max volume but it is not as loud as DaB instruction videos when I leave at roughly half-volume.

edited at 6:27 AM, Jun 27th 2023
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