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3:40 AM, Saturday April 25th 2020
With your organic arrows, the spacing of the near and close could be pushed more, otherwise they look very nice.
Your sausage forms are quite wobbly but it looks like you fixed that up with your dissection forms.
The gradation on your texture analysis is a bit too abrupt and rushed looking, you want the forms to creep out from being in full shadow, not have thick black lines next to a partially shaded shape.
Your form dissections look nice, you missed a few opportunities to wrap the texture around the form, like with the "back well" and "bark" textures.
Your form intersections look fine, but your organic intersections have a bit of a clingy shadow, you want the shadows to wrap around the forms they fall on, and vary as the distance between the forms change.
Overall everything looks good, keep up the good work!
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Feel free to move on to lesson 3. :)
7:04 AM, Wednesday April 29th 2020
Texture analysis was actually really hard for me, I know it was bad but you pointing out the mistakes made me understand what I should work on. In organic intersections, I realised that I placed some shadows in wrong places and was like 'oops, this is ink, no turning back now.' and had to roll with it as if it was correct. Will definitework on that. Thank you so much!
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