You had a great start to the exercise! Most of the lines were converging, if not close to convergence. However, I see where you might have rushed later in the assignment.

• From pages 1-10 the boxes and their lines were visible on the page. While many of the lines converged, they overlapped with other shapes and forms which made them hard to see. Boxes 24 and 25 are a bit mishapen. I think you were too worried about the top rectangles here, so I agree you should focus on the lines. Boxes 28 and 29 appear too extreme because their lines diverge instead of converging.

• From pages 11-50, your boxes became too big and many lines veer off the page so it is difficult to tell if there is convergence or not. Try to draw smaller in future lessons so you can observe the perspective.

• Lastly, many boxes seem to lose dramatic perspective due to the the lines moving away from each other instead of towards each other (see box 201). This assignment is alot of work, but try to be patient and you will likely see desired results.

Recommendations

• Use different materials

  • Use colored pencils/pens to draw the converging lines. This will make it easier for you (and others) to see your converging lines. It is not necesarily a problem if shapes overlap as long as the lines are visible. If you don't have colored pencils/pens, try using a pencil for the lines, and a pen for the boxes.

• Draw smaller

  • Drawing smaller boxes will allow us to see how your forms converge. The boxes don't have to be that much smaller. Just go for the sizes you had in pages 1-10.