This is certainly an improvement, and enough of one that I don’t need to ask for a second re-do, but I’ll request that you be a little more mindful of my instructions. In my original critique, for the superimposed lines, I said ‘it’d be nice if you could experiment with different lengths of lines, as per the instructions (a few inches, then double that, then half-page width, then full-page width.)’ For the ghosted lines, I said ‘you haven’t been too careful about starting the line at the correct starting point. Remember that though it’s okay for it to overshoot the end point, or stop short of it, the starting point should be respected, as, contrary to it, this one speaks to our patience, in lining up our pen. By the way, here, too, it’d have been nice to try out a bunch of different lengths.’ Neither of these are any better in this submission, unfortunately, and that’s a bit of a missed opportunity, considering you’re already going through the trouble of doing it again. Nonetheless, what I was after was confidence, and these have that, so I’ll let you move on to the next part.