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8:53 AM, Thursday August 6th 2020

hi,

Congrats on finishing lesson 1. First of all U did well some of those homework, but i think u hurry to much in late ones. Lines, Ellipses on planes, and even funnels goes pretty good. Ur 1 and 2 point perspective exercises also are acceptable. Unfortunately rotated box and organic boxes are not so good. Pls don't hurry so much, examine ur lines. Always try to use ghosting method, us will see where your line will end before U put mark on page. On organic boxes u could try simple form of that first line u need to draw. u shouldn't crossed itself and consider more like a line flow through space. Although those errors are acceptable on start, u should avoid them in later exercises. Unfortunately the rotated box are far too off what's needed to be done. Pls consider redraw this exercise. Read instructions again. Don't be hasty. the boxes should lay near each other and the lines of nearest box should be close to parallel. Good job and don't try hard. u don't need to do everything in one shot.

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Pls try redo rotated box.

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
5:16 AM, Friday August 7th 2020

Thanks for your feedback. I agree with the rotated box stuff, i was tryna get through it a lil too fast and i wasnt learning too much. I definitely did it better this time, tell me what you think

Thanks!

https://imgur.com/a/4poMfvi

6:14 AM, Friday August 7th 2020

Hi ok this is much better then last one. I hope that Ur lines will be more confident and smoother. Don't worry, this comes through doing more and more exercises and drawings. also remember about composition, try to use whole area of page to do the task. Now U can move on, as you want, but before lesson 2 try to do 250 box challenge.

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hi,

You can move on as U finish lesson 1 homework, next stop will be self critique exercise of 250 box challenge. Good luck with that. Remember to not be hasty, i did that one in about month. After that U will take lesson 2.

Cheers,

Szymon

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