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3:33 PM, Saturday September 11th 2021
edited at 5:42 PM, Sep 12th 2021

Hi, I'm back! Here are my revisions: https://imgur.com/a/WGyh8tA

Some notes about the organic intersections exercise:

  • I struggled with adding line weight to overlapping forms. If I did it with my usual thin pen (idk the english terms), it would come out unnoticeable and if I did it with the thicker one, it would blend in with the cast shadow. EDIT: Nevermind, I found out I have the wrong pen. I'll buy the correct one for future lessons.

  • I added the small form in the top right after I added the cast shadows, that was a mistake. Now the cast shadow overlaps the form, which doesn't make sense. Just letting you know I'm aware of that mistake.

  • Somehow I missed hearing "you can draw through your forms" when I watched uncomfortable's video before, that's probably the reason my forms were floating. Should be better now.

Feel free to assign more homework before moving me onto lesson 3 if you think it's necessary, improvement is my number one priority. Looking forward to hearing your response, hope you're still active.

edited at 5:42 PM, Sep 12th 2021
4:47 PM, Sunday September 26th 2021

I am so so sorry for leaving you waiting for so long! I took a small break from Dab but I'm back now.

I can definitely see improvement in your revisions, your forms look more 3D now and the organic intersections feel like they have more weight to them now.

There is not much I can add, there are a couple of mistakes here and there but I believe that you can improve upon them by simply adding these exercises to your warm up sessions.

I believe you are ready for L3.

Next Steps:

Move on to Lesson 3.

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8:28 PM, Sunday September 26th 2021

It's alright! I asked for some feedback on the discord like you recommended, they said it was fine so I went ahead to lesson 3. Thanks again for the critique, I keep coming back to it when I'm struggling.

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