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10:09 PM, Friday July 8th 2022

Thank you so much for your critique and thanks a bunch for the draw overs. I definitely see that I have many areas I need to improve on.

https://imgur.com/a/EY3UpMj

As requested I tried to do a revision but im still struggling with shadows a bit. I do see my mistakes as many of the shadows aren't consistent with one another and don't cast correctly on the forms so I will continue to practice this as I move forward.

4:26 PM, Saturday July 9th 2022

Np! I'm glad i can help. For your revision of the Organic Intersection exersise, i'm pleased to see that you actually follow my critique and are able to achieve a better result. Of course if i'm being nicpicky, there's a few thing you can keep improving on, for example:

https://imgur.com/a/cG7Wx40

But then again. you're very self-aware and point out your shortcomings yourself (which is great! since you have to realize it in order to improve on it), therefore, i'll mark your assignment as complete! Please feel free to move on to L3.

Good luck! Keep up the spirit, you can do this.

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3:46 AM, Sunday July 10th 2022

Thank you??

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