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4:46 PM, Thursday February 15th 2024

https://imgur.com/a/RrbLk2z

This is the orientation that I was going for. Also I circled the back corner of 3,6,7, and 10 to see if that better clarifed the orientation

8:54 PM, Wednesday February 21st 2024

None of these look like the back corners of the boxes. They all look like front corners closest to the viewer. I think this might be because your lines are still off from one another. Slow down and really look at the direction a line is going in before trying to match it with another. And really ghost that line before drawing it

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10 more with the tips I gave. You’re getting there

When finished, reply to this critique with your revisions.
2:03 AM, Monday March 4th 2024
9:51 PM, Monday March 4th 2024

https://imgur.com/a/UNuRhYy

3 and 8 are still coming towards the viewer. You said before that you weren’t sure how to make the shading look like it’s on the side of the box instead of the back, and I think that’s making you still extend the lines in the wrong direction.

Up there, I colored in the part you should be shading to make it look like it’s the side of the box instead of the back. I think you’ve been shading between the wrong lines

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