Hello and congrats on completing lesson 1. I'll be taking a look at your submission today. Starting with your superimposed lines these are off to a pretty good start. You are keeping a clearly defined start point for these and have minimal tapering until you challenged yourself with longer lines and curves. Now there is plenty of room for improvement here, especially in regards to your curves, so keep up with the practice. Moving onto your ghosted lines and planes. These are very well done. You are doing a great job with the ghosting method here to achieve smooth linework with a high degree of accuracy. Great job.

Your table of ellipses are coming along well. You are doing a good job drawing through every ellipse you put down which is great. You are also focusing more on maintaining a solid ellipse shape over complete accuracy which is the right call. Now your ellipses in planes are decent for the most part but I'm noticing a few issues. One is that you are probably drawing through one too many times on these. When drawing through your ellipses try and keep it to 2 - 3 times max. Keeping it at 2 is best if you can but if you feel it hurts your results just keep it at 3. Now for some of these I'm seeing 3 - 4 times which is making things look just a bit messy. There are also some slight issues with you deforming your ellipses a bit for the sake of accuracy. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/12/deformed It's not a huge issue but just something I want you to be aware of and think about. Your ellipses in funnels came out okay and are a good start. All said your ellipses could still use plenty of work so keep them as part of your warmups.

Plotted perspective looks great no issues here. I'm noticing a few issues with your rough perspective boxes. First off, good job extending your lines back and checking your work here. As you can see a lot of your estimations were quite off but this will get better with practice. Now you are running into some problems with sloppy linework here. Students tend to skip ghosting and start drawing from their wrist a lot when working through this exercise and I think it's because they are focusing a bit too much on the spatial problems they are thinking about and I'm noticing it here with your lines. So I just want to remind you to make sure you are ghosting all of your lines no matter how short they are and to try and draw from your shoulder. You also are slanting a lot of your verticals here when they should be straight up and down so that is something else for you to consider.

Your rotated box exercise turned out pretty well all things considered. You did a great job with the ghosting method here and your linework turned out quite well. You also did a great job drawing through your boxes and keeping your gaps narrow and consistent. You did run into a common beginner problem though and that is that you aren't really rotating your boxes at all and are instead simply moving them back into perspective. Please check the lesson notes here. https://drawabox.com/lesson/1/16/notrotating When a box rotates it's vp actually changes from the box that is in front of it. Your organic perspective boxes are looking okay but there are quite a few convergence issues I'm noticing throughout. You will get a lot of practice with this during the 250 box challenge.

Overall this was a really good submission. You followed the instructions very well and showed some nice improvement working through these pages. I'm going to mark this lesson as complete and good luck with the box challenge. Keep up the good work!