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5:48 PM, Tuesday July 4th 2023

Aside from the redrawing these are looking better.

Remember that every mark you make is ultimately a choice, if you're redrawing and feeling like you did so without stopping yourself before noticing it's likely a sign that you're rushing. You should plan your line, draw it and then begin planning the next line, if you're not intentionally thinking about each mark then you're not taking the time necessary to think about what you're doing and what you've done.

I will be marking your submission complete and moving you ahead in hopes that you will address this yourself. If it continues to be an issue however know that you'll likely get more and potentially harsher revisions in the future.

Best of luck in lesson 3.

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Move on to lesson 3.

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12:56 AM, Wednesday July 5th 2023

Thanks you for the help.I'll be sure to be more intentional with my work, I did notice I was having trouble with that lately.

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