In the beginning, I was using a sketchbook but it was brought to my attention not to, so towards the end I changed that but other then that I feel pretty good about boxes now :) Also that link goes to the half end of my boxes, my first set of boxes are also on imgur on my account there...
Hi Jtally,
I've checked your submission,
I'm gonna start out by saying that you should really try to make it as easy as possible for people to review your work, and I'm not saying this as a complain, I'm telling you this because you have been waiting for more than a month, and I've been there (not more than a month, but a whole month) It's hard. Though, remember that the critique's are pretty dependent of the community, so even if it takes you a little more time to organize your submission, do it, you will make work easier to whoever will review it, and you will get a review earlier.
Now, on to the actual review:
It looks like you got the idea of this challenge. Your boxes get bigger and more confident and you are hitting more converging lines. However there are a few things that I see that could have improvements.
First, I see that you are struggling a bit with you back corner, wellcome to the club:
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/725744395718230146/725745452691095643/How_draw_a_box.png
Here is a little help that you can use whenever you do some boxes for warm up!
Secondly, for what I'm seeing in your boxes, your mostly get how convergence works, though you are lacking a little bit:
So here is another help to check out!
One last thing, remember that you can review other people's work and, not only you learn a lot from it, but it makes that your submissions stay higher in the list for a longer period of time.
I'm gonna mark this challenge as completed! Keep it up.
Next Steps:
Move on to Lesson 2!
These are what I use when doing these exercises. They usually run somewhere in the middle of the price/quality range, and are often sold in sets of different line weights - remember that for the Drawabox lessons, we only really use the 0.5s, so try and find sets that sell only one size.
Alternatively, if at all possible, going to an art supply store and buying the pens in person is often better because they'll generally sell them individually and allow you to test them out before you buy (to weed out any duds).
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