Lesson 2: Contour Lines, Texture and Construction

11:11 AM, Wednesday September 30th 2020

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Hello. So lesson 2 completed.

Superimposed curves posed quite a bit of trouble, getting it to line up with the original.

Capturing the essence of the texture was also s challenge, deciding where to put the black shapes and restrain yourself from putting too many unnecessary lines.

Looking back on the form intersections I can see some discrepancy in the foreshortening of objects and seeing intersections that aren't logical.

So thank you for your time for looking through my homework.

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9:31 AM, Wednesday October 14th 2020

All of your exercises are really good, so well done!

These are small flaws that I have noticed:

In the dissection exercise try to use shadows to define even better the texture.

In the form Intersections exercise you have messed up some intersections but that's normal (try to visualize the intersections in your mind, in three dimensions).

In the Organic Intersections exercise don't be afraid to cast the right shadows (the shadows are too thin).

That's all, your exercises were very good! Keep going and don't forget the 50 percent rule: at least half of the time you spend drawing must be devoted to drawing purely for its own sake.

Keep going!

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5:44 PM, Thursday October 15th 2020

Thank you very much for your time and pointing out the points to improve.

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