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2:21 PM, Tuesday February 14th 2023

Hello, I'll be critiquing your lesson for today.

Lines:

You have very slight wobble in your lines, this is natural and will get better with practice. Ghost as much as needed for you to execute a smooth confident line.

Ellipses:

In your table, some ellipses are either not touching the edges of the table, or each other. Make sure they form tangents with neighbouring lines.

Boxes:

Your organic perspectives are pretty sparse, try to fill it up more and have the change in perspective be more dramatic.

That's all, everything will come together with practice, so have fun!

Next Steps:

Move onto the 250 box challenge!

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6:23 PM, Friday February 17th 2023

Hello, thanks a lot for taking the time to critique my work. I'll move on to the 250 boxes challenge.

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