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9:47 AM, Sunday February 12th 2023

Your lines look confident and accurrate, no wobbling, arching or fraying on both ends. One small thing, you haven't done any curves in the superimposed lines exercise.

Your ellipses are drawn confidently and drawn through. You have a tiny bit of overlapping here and there on the ellipse tables. On the funnels the minor axis seems a little bit off on the top right funnel.

Your boxes are drawn through where they need to. Overall I don't see any mistakes on the boxes section

(I wrote this critique based on Elodin's guide for Lesson 1)

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4:46 PM, Friday February 17th 2023

Hello, thank you for taking the time to write this critique. You are correct about one of my funnels, I hadn't measured when I was creating the guidelines and my line was not centered between the curves. Again, thank you for the critique

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