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8:05 PM, Thursday August 19th 2021
hey poatatosoup your work looks good for the most part but in the table of ellipses exercise your ellipses where a bit off and it seems a bit rushed. some ellipses wernt even drawn through twice. you should take your time, plan out your ellipses by ghosting them first, and excuteing them by going though them twice. Overall i think you did a good job but a little rush it seems. id say continue working your ellipses with warmups in the future with and ill think youll get better
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work on your ellipses and ghosting more through warmups
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10:01 PM, Monday August 7th 2023
Pretty good work, the only things i'd like to point out is that you could give your boxes a bit more rotation in the organic perspectives, although you'll work on this a lot in the 250 box challenge. Also, make sure to continue ghosting lines when drawing boxes to keep the edges straight.
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10:02 PM, Monday August 7th 2023
sorry, forgot to mark the lesson as complete
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