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6:54 AM, Tuesday December 14th 2021
Hello there congrats on finishing lesson one, for future lessons try and submit all the exercises in one file/album.
Lines
The superimpossed lines are done in pencil, Its hard to make out certian aspects of the lines, They do seem mostly confident Most have fraying on on the ends but I see a good number with fraying on the start and the ends. Some of your superimpossed lines fray on both ends like the following. After ghosting put your pen at the start point then execute the line with the same confidence You are using now.
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The ghosted lines look good overall ,some are a bit bendy , try drawing with more speed. A bit more speed, after ghosting them of course. The ghosted planes lines are overall good but I would say the same as for the plotted lines.
Ellipses
Ghosted plane ellipses look confident, remember to always ghost these.
In the table of ellipses, there are manny ellipses not touching the bounds/ walls of the ellipse and many gaps between ellispes. Ellipses should be touching but not overlapping and they should be touching the bounds/walls of the tables.
https://d15v304a6xpq4b.cloudfront.net/lesson_images/7a41396e.jpg
Ghost all your ellipses in the places you want to drawn them and only drawn them in once you have confidence in the motion.
You are missing the funnel exercise here
Boxes
i dont see the plotted perspective either or the rotated boxes
Organic perspective looks good and flows but do not draw over lines. IF the line tou drawn in unsatisfactory you move on.
Rough perspective looks good, remember the vertical lines are perpendicular to the horizon and the horizontal lines of the boxes are paralell to the horizon. this will help you plot your lines.
Ghost the lines you have plotted and drawn them with confidence, If the lines is unsatisfactory move on to the next line.
Revision(well the other stuff is finishing the incomplete submission)
1/2 page , table of ellipses
plotted perspective(missing)
Funnels(missing)
rotated boxes(missing)
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Revision(well the other stuff is finishing the incomplete submission)
1/2 page , table of ellipses
plotted perspective(missing)
Funnels(missing)
rotated boxes(missing)
10:45 PM, Sunday March 27th 2022
Im not sure why these did not upload last time but here you go. and thanks for the feedback
5:33 PM, Saturday April 16th 2022
Sorry for the late reply , I hope you moved on. In the rotated boxes , there are many non straight lines, draw without confidence. remember plot lines and draw them with confidence.You have extra rows, there should only be 5, you have 7. Try and copy the video lesson line for line to get how you achieve the rotation.
The plotted perspective looks okay.
The ellipses are not touching their bounds. A good number seem really confident. Keep ghosting them and working on them. Keep working on improvement.
Good luck :) on to the 250 box challenge.
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A lot of my students use these. The last time I used them was when I was in high school, and at the time I felt that they dried out pretty quickly, though I may have simply been mishandling them. As with all pens, make sure you're capping them when they're not in use, and try not to apply too much pressure. You really only need to be touching the page, not mashing your pen into it.
In terms of line weight, the sizes are pretty weird. 08 corresponds to 0.5mm, which is what I recommend for the drawabox lessons, whereas 05 corresponds to 0.45mm, which is pretty close and can also be used.