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2:40 AM, Friday April 12th 2024
edited at 2:54 AM, Apr 12th 2024

Again, thank you for the review!

Welp, I forgot to upload the 2nd page of Superimposed Lines :p

Early on, I struggled with finding my correct ghosting 'speed', as in how fast should I trace the lines to be confident AND accurate. Now I kinda understand the emphasis on confidence compared to accuracy.

Didn't realize that redo-ing lines is bad, will take note of that.

[Edit: yes I scanned them; hard to find a good lighting for a photo here]

edited at 2:54 AM, Apr 12th 2024
7:28 AM, Friday April 12th 2024

its important to fix those small bad habits early, so that later you don't have those problems :)

1:39 PM, Friday May 3rd 2024
edited at 1:43 PM, May 3rd 2024

Alright this is the redo for Ghosted Planes exercises!

https://imgur.com/a/yhNOAbz

And this is one is the one that I forgot to send before :P

https://imgur.com/a/ek8i7Wp

(P.S: I'm replying here cuz I don't want the reply chain getting too deep :)

edited at 1:43 PM, May 3rd 2024
7:55 PM, Saturday May 4th 2024

the ghosted planes are much better :)

10:54 AM, Saturday April 27th 2024

I just realized that doing all of the redos will take a long time. Is it okay if I send each exercise when I finish them, rather than sending them all at once at the end?

5:58 PM, Sunday April 28th 2024

sure

3:07 PM, Tuesday May 14th 2024

Here's my Table of Ellipses redo!

https://imgur.com/a/eRiG8I4

This one somehow felt worse that before, though you would be a better judge for that.

7:34 PM, Saturday May 18th 2024

I think you understood the concept perfectly, your exceution is decent, do it as a warmup if you want

2:02 AM, Sunday June 9th 2024

Finally, here's my Rough Perspective redo! Sorry for the late reply though.

https://imgur.com/a/soPhkqR

3:58 PM, Sunday June 9th 2024

these are done really well

3:59 PM, Sunday June 9th 2024

i think you are ready for the 250 box challenge, good job and good luck

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